Thursday, December 9, 2010

enam

tk 6,dye minx 'six songs that you're addicted to'..adeh,payah ni,sbb slalunye ak ni jenis akn brtuka2 lagu yg ak minat,,kadang2 tgh minat lagu2 indie,pstu rock lak,,then dangdut,,haha
xpela..for now layan jela lagu2 yg ak letak ni

1. spencer davis group - keep on running
**series ak trase nk simpan rambut mcm vokalis dye tu,,hahaha

2. the beatles - help

3. chuck berry - johnny b. goode
**lagu ni ad dlm cite back to the future..yg marty mcfly nyanyi time prom nigth

4. spider - mabuk

5. 6ixth sense - yang sempurnakanku

6. wali band - orang bilang

7. monoloque & atilia - kekanda adinda

eh eh,terlebih sudah =P

Tuesday, December 7, 2010

7.fobia

lame dah x update blog ak ni,,kali ni plak nk cte bnde2 fobia ak,,xnk dahla cte psl fobia dgn air/ktinggian ni sbb ak dh cte sblm ni..kali ni nk cte detail sket psl fobia time bwk keta

yg first tentang driving dlm cuace yg xelok,terutama tim hujan ribut..pena skali time aku drive dkt changlun..mase tu otw balek dari padang besar dgn caon n zaki..time2 tgh hujan ribut,jarak penglihatan ak yg slalunye bole nmpk jauh skrg bole pandang dlm 40 ke 50 meter kehadapan..mmg dah slow dh bwk tu,,50-60kmh dah..
tp yg buat cuaknye ak nmpk lori kt blkg ak tu bwk laju btol2 ekor rapat kt blkg aku,,tkot2 je lori tu nk overtake atau trgelincir,,mau2 dye sapu ak skali..huh,,nseb baek ad stesen minyak pastu..rilek dlu lps dh reda sket hujan bru gerak blk..

ckp psl stesen minyak lak..ak skrg dh fobia dgn stesen minyak esso,,ni sume sbb kmalangan 10/10/09 tula,,time tu nk pi beraya kt umah afif(mmbr INTI) kt semenyih..xpena pn pi stu,dlm keta lak aku sorg je laki,,laen amoi2 (xde ap2 brlaku ye >.<) je..so mmg mgharapkn ak jela nk hafal jln..si afif lak lalu jln laen so janji jmpe kt umah dye teros..smpai2 aku kt area semenyih dlm pkl 8mlm,,ak jd lost lak tkot2 trlepas simpang msok umah dye..so singgahla kt stesen minyak esso nk tnye jalan..ak pi la tnye mamat kt kaunter minyak tu,,dye ckp ak kne turn blk nk msok simpang msok taman umah afif,,lps kuar je dr stesen minyak aku igt nk turn jela sbrg jalan wlaupun jalan double line..mmg time tu ak dh bajet line clear keta dr dua2 arah jauh lg,,dgn confidentnye ak pn buat la u-turn..tp malangnye GEDEGANGG!!ad motor org india bwk dr arah blkg langgar keta ak,,kne belah depan kanan (belah driver ak) hbes putu mayam yg moto tu bwk brterabur kt tgh jalan..penunggang tu??dye plak dpt merasa jd superman terbang dpn bonet keta ak mnjunam ke garisan double line..mmg cuak gle time tu,,nseb la lps tu mmbr2 ak yg naek afif smpai,,slmt la sket..kalo x mati jgkla,,kwsn tu kwsn kaum india,,kalo sorg2 time tu tkot2 aku kne tibai,,psl dorg tibai tu ak xkesa lg,,ni dahla ak bwk amoi2,,kang ap2 jd..ak jgk tggung,,anak2 org tu =(..

fobia ak pasal driving ni xhbes lg ni..ni cte psl jalan2 kampung..ak gelarkn jln kampung sbai jalan2 yg xde lampu jalan yg terang time mlm2,,pmbahagi jalan pn mcm ade xde je,,n sume pngguna jalan raya(jalan kaki,moto,keta) maen redah je nk lintas jalan..kali ni lak kt kemuning dkt2 dgn sri muda..time tu pn dah la gelap (agak2 pkl 9 lbih dah) nk hntr mmbr ak umah makcik dye..haishh,,bole diibarat jalan tu mcm mnunggu masa je utk ad excident,,sume org bwk mcm pelesit,,xkesa keta ke moto ke kalo nk msok simpang bkn maen laju,,ad lak yg blom smpai lg simpang tu dh speed pstu bwk mnyenget msok jalan brtentengan arah..ak mcm nk trcabut je jantung mse bwk kt stu,,tkot2 kne lg xcident =.=''

time kecik2 dlu ak pena fobia nk naek beskal,,ni sume sbb time ak umur 4 tahun ak pena bonceng basikal yg kakak ak bwk..ntah mcm mne kaki ak trsepit kt bhgian rim tayar blkg smpai ak patah kaki..hahah sedih btol..fobia dah ak naek beskal waimah yg tiga roda tu pn..skrg xfobia dah cume smpai kesudah xreti2 lg naek beskal,,ish3

walaupun ak fobia dgn driving,,tp xpena lak trase xnk drive lg,,hehe
org kate slalunye bile org yg pena kne excident dye akn drive lbih brhemah sket lps tu..aku kate "mungkinlah" =P

Thursday, December 2, 2010

8 things that annoys me

sbnrnye ad lg bberapa benda yg buat ak annoyed sgt..tp sbb jga aib,,prkara2 tu ak xsiapkn

1.movie2 kt astro
kbanyakan movie zaman2 dlu pnye..
tramatla boring..

2.apeeez,,pinjam keta (muke gedik) =.=''

3.dh signal tp xmsok..xsignal tp masok laju2

4.jalan2 kt kedai baju..saje je tgk dr jauh..
sbok lak pmbantu kdai follow kehulu khilir dlm kedai..
dahla,,malas nk beli,,rimas

5.''alaa..ko kn pandai''
^#$#%$^...ko taw x betapa struggle ak nk aim dptkn TER 85..skrg tgh cuak bole x nk fly ke x ni
huh

6.''anak bongsu sure manje''
anak mane yg sayang dgn mak dye xmanje dgn mak dye??ckp sket..
kalo nk kate ak lbih kurang je mcm abg ak..kdg2 ade je dye manje dgn mak ak,,
cume bkn dpn2 ak la..sure jatuh saham dye,,keh3

7.bile masok satu tempat baru..
terase mcm ak ni alien,,sume pndg ak mcm ak ni keajaiban alam
jangan pandang ak cmtu bole x??

8.rase gatal2 kt dlm gegendang telinga
nk garu xbole,,tp pnyela miang rase,,hishh

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

9 things you do everyday

1.beli newspaper
mmg tugas aku la pagi2 ni kne beli paper..utusan dgn the star,,kdg2 harian metro upon request mak ak,,

2.br'facebook'..myspace dan segala alah yg sewaktu dgnnye..
xtrkecuali layan gak blog2 politik ni mcm the unspinners,,tranungkite.net

3.jd driver mak
rase dh mcm hmpir tiap2 hari aku akn drive kreta altis bwk mak ak pi mcm2 tempat (giant,,tesco,,mydin,,pasar,,klang)kalo xhntr lak kang xdpt plak nk kuar dgn mmbr,,hehe

4.tgk tv
layan la ap2 channel yg ad kt astro ni

5.maen game
currently tgh maen game footbal manager 2011
teringin lak nk maen COD bru,,tp la nnti dlu

6.ber'wikimapia'
haha..yg ni laen sket,,ak kdg2 suke gak tgk peta2 ni,tgk cmne nk gerak ke kl la..jalan2 kt penang la,,mne la taw kot2 one day ak nk drive ke sne..so dh hafal la jln dye
bkn ke elok kalo kite rancangkn perjalanan dlu..hehe
lps ni nk hafal jalan2 kt aussie,kui3

7.tgk movie
ad la bberape movie dlm harddisk ni yg blom tgk..so layan jela kalo boring

8.maen dgn beba
awal2 bgn pg nnti beba ngiaw2 nk minx mknn.
lps tu siang2 mula carik ak maen2 dgn dye..
smpai tgh mlm je dtg mnyendeng2 kt ak minx belai
haihh..beba beba

9.basuh pinggan
tiap2 malam ak kne pastikn pinggan sume dah siap dbasuh..
tu la tugas mak ak kasi utk ak cuti ni
kalo x karang pkl 2 3 pg ade la received msg dr mak ak
"kate nk basuh pggan sblm tdo.." or "ni nk harap gajah mne nk basuhkn pggan2 tu??"
=.=''

Saturday, November 27, 2010

10 random things about me

hepi sgt punye pasal..aku stuju jela permintaan bro sham kite ni..nah,,amik kau

1. aku anak bongsu
tp xbermakna langsung aku manja..same je mcm adek bradek laen

2. ade sekor kucing
nme dye beba..mak letak nme tu
pengaruh telenovela amerika latin time tgh hangat dlu.. =.=''
more about her later

3. drive honda city
techincally bukan keta aku..mak kasi PINJAM time belajar kt inti dlu,,
senang nak balik..xpayah nk kne naek ktm yg sgt mlecehkn
tp skrg abg ak lak byk gune keta tu..pdhal ade je myvi hitam tu
aircond rosakla..boot city besar,,nk transfer brgla..mcm2 alasan minx.
tp xkesah sbb asal dye pkai je minyak slalu full tank,,haha

4. minat tgk bola
esp team manchester united,,haha (bro sham tiru)
dah lame kot jadi peminat setia..dr aku drjah satu
btol2 after world cup 1998 smpaila sekarang
story la psl sejarah man utd..taw beb,,haha
siap taw lg legend2 man utd i.e george best,,bobby charlton,,denis law,,andy cole
ruud van nistelrooy,,cristiano ronaldo etc etc
bro sham kite taw ke nme awal2 tu,,sure x pnye,,haha

5. brketurunan minangkabau dari bukittinggi,indonesia
ni dapat dari belah mak,, nenek mmg migrate ke tanah melayu sblm WWII lg..
tahun 2007 pena skali melawat ke tmpt asal ni
siap singgah rumah nenek kt sne,,
xde plak gmbr nk tunjuk =(

6. ade 2 anak buah
sorg laki sorg pmpuan
yg laki dr kakak 1st,,umar rayyan b mohd hasrul
yg pmpuan lak kakak 2nd,, najla nafeesa b mohd hafiz fikri
yg kakak scnd ni sbok brcerita psl najla kt blog beliau,,tinjau2 la sndr http://mawar-my.blogspot.com/

7.kaki wayang/movie
kaki ni wajib ke panggung sbulan skali
kalo x badan resah gelisah hati gundah gulana (over suda)
layan je mcm2 genre..tp kalo bole kdg2 mgelak dr tgk cite seram
eden meah smgt,,hehe

8.takot air..takot tinggi
yes..segala bnde melibat kn ketinggian ataupn ad atas air ak mmg cuak =.=''
nk pkai jejantas pn kdg2 cuak
apetah lg naek roller coaster

9.suke makan aiskrim
kalo pegi kdai shell ke xpn kedai runcit..mgkn akn beli cornetto chocluv
kalo gerak mall mne2,,sure singgah baskin robbins,,beli yg 1 scoop jela
mahal kot
xsabar tggu 31 hb sbb bole beli handpacked BR dgn 31% diskaun
nyum nyum

10.xmakan seafood
eczema pnye psl..selera kt seafood mmg xde
karang gatal naek satu bdn..
tp bile mak bwat sambal udang,,mmg pantangla xamek sambal tu
sedapp gile

dah,,sekian

Thursday, November 25, 2010

kartiniku..



salam,,, akibat boring punye pasal,,aku pn ikot la jugak tuka profile pic aku sempena 'WEEK OF THE RIGHTS OF THE CHILDREN' ltk gambar kartun yang pena aku layan mase dlu..

punye la serious ak pikiaq nk letak katun ape,,igt
nk letak kartun2 time aku budak2 tadika mcm doraemon ke,,dragon ball ke,,cow and chicken ke,,dexter's lab ke,,dgn yg swaktu dgnnye la..

tp tringat lak aku dulu start darjah 4 dah mule layan komik2 tempatan trutamanye ujang n lanun..
so ak ltk la cite KARTINI..


but ni bukanla consider komik sgt but novel grafik yg mngisahkn cerita cinta monyet kartunis ni (cerita sbnr) time dye skola kt skola agame berasrama dlu..(kalo x silap skola agame kt perak kot..xcnfirm)..watak utama nme yon cube nk tackle bdk junior dye nme kartini tp xkesampaian..cume time awal2 tu la tini layan maen balas2 surat (time ni hp xwujud lg) tp last2 bru dye taw cinta dye brtepuk sblh tangan..


cite ni lagi tua dr aku kot,,terbit sejak 1990,,first time aku bce buku ni time kakak aku beli...
time msok soksek aku bwk skali buku ni,,pena kot hilang skali tp naseb baek jmpe blk..tp time nak akhir tahun f5 hri trakhir skola aku simpan komik ni kt loker dlm kelas,,igt tgh hari tu nk kutip la dgn sume buku2 yg ad dlm tu..tgk2 pekerja dlm campak sume buku2 yg ad dlm kelas kt kompound utk dijual...habes sayup hati aku hilang komik tu smpai skrg ni (sume pakcik zalan pnye pasal suro pkrja2 tu buang buku2) =( kalo korg ad copy satu aku nk beli dr korg,,xnak yg version baru coz yg baru bru sleng dah dibakukan..xseronok nk mmbace

*selaen dari kartini aku layan gak 'aku,dia dan volkswagen'..'workshop' & 'aku dia dan selamanya'...

Monday, November 22, 2010

mula balek

seriously nk mula balek usaha & niat murni aku nk berblog balek..
tp xtaw knp time nak start menulis je aku jd macam xde idea lak nak tulis ape..=.=''
haihh

memang byk bende ley aku cakapkn..tentang diri,,ape yg aku buat,,psl bende yang aku minat,,ap opinion ak psl satu2 bende & mcm2 lg la..

tapi mgkin sbbaku xpernah nak tulis balek ape yg bwat/pikir..xmcm perempuan/wanita/the other gnder yg kbanyakan siap ade diari cantik bagai..tu yang ak jadi blur je bile nk post kt blog ni..
lagi2la aku ni xhebat mnulis dalam BI mahupn BM..rsult exam utk sbjek ni ala2 kadar je
xpelah,,post kali ni cume nak biar aku biasekn menulis kt dalam blog aku yg berhabuk lagi usang ni..slow2 nak belajar perihal berblogging ni...



p/s: al-fatihah buat nenek kwn intec..semoga beliau dcucuri rahmat dan dtempatkn dikalangan orang2 briman..amin

Friday, October 1, 2010

GOODLUCK

goodluck to all u guys for trial next week..this is the finest hour in our CSAM programme...use it well =) CHAIYOKK!!!

Tuesday, August 10, 2010

aussie news: Elusive driver jailed after 400km chase

A DRUNK and disqualified driver pursued by police for over 400km from Townsville to Mackay at high speeds has lost his licence for almost five years and been jailed for 18 months.

The father of two had an alcohol reading three times the legal limit of .170 per cent.

But it's believed to have been much higher as the pursuit was ended five hours after he got behind the wheel following a drinking session.

Sean Joseph Preston, 22, pleaded guilty yesterday in the Townsville Magistrates Court to nine charges including dangerous driving, drink driving, driving while disqualified, four fail to stop for police and two theft of fuel.

Police prosecutor Sergeant Deb Bisley said the multiple police chase started at Rasmussen on September 7 when Preston avoided a random breath test about 2am.

"A white Holden Commodore was seen pulling into an IGA car park and drive out the other entrance," she said.

Townsville police pursued but the chase was called off when the vehicle failed to stop.

Preston was then seen at an Alligator Creek Caltex service station driving off without paying for $49 worth of fuel.

The Ayr police were next to attempt intercepting the defendant as he travelled south on the Bruce Highway at dangerously high speeds.

"They attempted to intercept and he accelerated heavily away - at 170km in a 100km zone," Sgt Bisley said.

Ayr police spotted Preston on Queen St soon after where he failed to give-way to a patrol car at a roundabout speeding away in a 70km/h zone at more than 142km/h on the wrong side of the road.

Bowen police were next, their attempt to intercept the car parked at a construction site was foiled when reversed away into a U-turn and drove off at 138km/h in an 80km/h zone.

The defendant then drove off without paying for $52 worth of fuel at Airlie Beach Mobil service station.

Mackay police, who heard the pursuits over the radio, ended the escapade five hours later at 7am.

"He was parked in by traffic at a red light and was arrested," Sgt Bisley said.

Magistrate Smid refused to accept the defendant's dangerous high-speed highway dash was all because of an alcohol problem.

Defence lawyer Marie Kerfoot argued her client was turning his troubled times around.

"He wants a family life and wants to be alcohol-free,"' she said.

Mr Smid was also skeptical about that argument remarking"too many people like you (Preston) claim to be getting their life together just before a magistrate sentences them."

The magistrate sentenced Preston, who has spent six months in custody already and was on probation for a break and enter offence, to 18 months' prison with a parole release date later this month.

The defendant was disqualified from driving for four years for unlicensed driving, three months for drink driving, six months for dangerous operation and two months for each failing to stop offence. He was fined $400 for the fuel thefts.

comments:

firstly, i seriously think that the state police needs to have a better way in catching these reckless drunk drivers other chasing them across the state but ends up losing them, its such a waste. Second, for me the punishment sentenced to this guy is a bit lenient. Come on, this guy could cause an accident which fatal innocent lives. Maybe a heftier punishment should be imposed for illegal traffickers who had seen driving dangerously.

on contrary, i do feel the complexity of the judge to sentence those who were found guilty. Like this example, the defendant said that he tried to get his life back together before the magistrate. This could actually give the magistrate a headache to accept that the defendant has really admit his mistake or just to fool the magistrate so they get lighter punishment. however, i am sympathized by this guy as he is still young and have a family to support. i hope the jail sentence, although it is considered short term but will give a valuable lesson. I also hoped that his family can get through which maybe their darkest hour of their life.

Monday, May 31, 2010

Argumentative essay (TELEVISION WATCHING) draft 2

In has become a norm in developed countries where watching television is one of the most popular past-time activity compared to the others. Statistics showed that an average of two and a half hours is spent by total population, dwarfing other leisure and past time activities (American Time Use Survey 2003). Amid the statistics and current social trend, people are still arguing about whether this past time activity brings more harm than good to the society. There are sound evidences to support that watching television actually brings a lot of advantages such as improving an individual’s critical thinking, creating more entertaining education environment and exposing people to current issues and other cultures.

First and foremost, television programs can be harnessed to enhance more critical thinking especially among youngsters. Such programs like ‘Friends’ for example, although it is seen to give a negative influences, but teenagers can discuss with their parents how problems are resolved in the program and finding other more viable solution than shown on the television program (Sharif 1999). From there, students are able to engage in critical thinking when it comes to discussing more serious issues of social problems varying from globalization to poverty (Leigh 2001).

Furthermore, the television provides an alternative medium for learning process. Television as an audio-visual medium proven to be a popular teaching tool among preschools as children are more likely to comprehend and maintain information they have seen and heard rather than simply read (Leigh 2001). Besides that, television uses animation and puppets to make learning more fun and entertaining (Rutherford 2002). On the other hand, older children can cope with subjects like science and geography better through variety techniques in television which is unique and interesting (Leigh 2001).

Ideally, television watching can expose younger generation to gain additional knowledge on local and global issues. Current news broadcast on television provide information to the youth about global problems. Consequently, it may encourage them to take part in charity works (Sharif 1999). In addition, television could be a tool for democracy through direct exposure of latest events to the public (Rutherford 2002). By watching tourism and cultural channel, children proved to be more aware of their own culture and other cultures in the world, garnering knowledge of the animal kingdom and discovering sciences that will increase curiosity about the world around them (Leigh 2001 & Rutherford 2002). Apart from that, watching television can revitalize and able to concentrate on things like homework after a tiring day at school (Rutherford 2002).

In conclusion, it is crystal clear that we can harness the television program to gain benefit from it. We need to be remindful so that watching television excessively can be avoided. We should set aside criticism that singled out only on viewing habits that are unhealthy and excessive (Rutherford 2002). Technology made with good side and flipside, it is up to us to analyze and decide which should we take.

Monday, May 17, 2010

Argumentative essay (TELEVISION WATCHING) draft 1

In has become a norm in developed countries where watching television is one of the most popular past time activity compared to the others. Statistics showed that an average of two and a half hours is spent by total population, dwarfing other leisure and past time activities (American Time Use Survey 2003). Amid the statistics and current social trend, people are still arguing about whether this past time activity brings more harm than good to the society. There are sound evidences to support that watching television is actually brings a lot of advantages such as improving an individual critical thinking, creating more entertaining education environment and exposing people to current issues and other culture.

First and foremost, television programs can be harnessed to enhance more critical thinking especially among youngsters. Such programs like ‘Friends’ for example, although it is seen to give a negative influences, but teenagers can discuss with their parents how problems are resolved in the program and finding other more viable solution than shown on the television program (Sharif 1999). From there, students especially are being able to engage critical thinking when it comes to discussing more serious issues of social problems varying from globalization to poverty (Leigh 2001).

Furthermore, the television provides an alternative medium for learning process. Television as an audio-visual medium proven to be more popular teaching tool among preschools as they are more likely to comprehend and maintain information they have seen and heard rather than simply read (Leigh 2001). Besides that, television uses animation and puppets to make learning more fun and entertaining (Rutherford 2002). On the other hand, older children can cope with subjects like science and geography better through variety techniques in television which is unique and interesting (Leigh 2001).

Ideally, television watching can expose younger generation to gain additional knowledge on local and global issues. Current news broadcast on television can inform to the youth about global problems. Consequently, it may encourage them to take part in charity works (Sharif 1999). In addition, television could be a tool for democracy through direct exposure of latest events to the public (Rutherford 2002). By watching tourism and cultural channel, children proved to be more aware of their and other cultures in the world, garnering knowledge of the animal kingdom and discovering sciences that will increase curiosity about the world around them (Leigh 2001 & Rutherford 2002). Apart from that, watching television can revitalized and able to concentrate on things like homework after a tiring day at school (Rutherford 2002).

In conclusion, it is crystal clear that we can harness the television program to gain benefit from it. We need to be remindful so that watching television excessively can be avoided. We should set aside criticism that singled out only on viewing habits that are unhealthy and excessive (Rutherford 2002). Technology made with good side and flipside, it is up to us to analyze and decide which should we take.

Thursday, May 13, 2010

Argumentative essay (JUNK FOOD) final draft

Obesity among our children has seen an epidemic rise for the past few years and all the fingers are all pointing at the voracious consumption of junk food, which are foods that are believed to be unhealthy and lack in nutrients (Smith 2005). The accusation has some relevance to it as statistic showed that in year 2003, relatively 50 % of children have consume sugar and fat more than recommended, the large source of this came from eating junk foods like fast foods and soda drinks (Australian Nutrition Journal 2004). There is a large debate on should the junk food to be banned from selling in the school canteen or not. I strongly believed that it is indeed a wise solution to ban the sale of junk food in school canteen as it brings a lot of consequences.

Junk food is considered the main culprit of many health problems, including obesity problems. Smith (2005) agrees that eating junk food is a part of healthy diet if taken in moderation. But, the problem is these junk foods are over-consumed by the youngsters (The Food Show 2005). This is backed with the fact that for the past 30 years, the nutritional value of food eaten by Australian children has been falling gradually due to availability of junk foods in school canteens in which more than 50% of schoolchildren buy all their lunches consist of junk foods. This is contributing to weight gain because junk foods raise kilojoule intake and lack physical activity to burn the calories (Tran 2005). Besides that, Dental Association also lauds for banning of soft drinks sale in schools because there is declining trend of dental health in primary-school children (Tran 2005).

Secondly, the chemical additives contained in junk foods are causing behavioural problems in children. Snack foods have a craze towards younger generation. Out of thirteen most popular snack foods, only four of it has high nutritional value (Health Foundation 2005), which means the others have loads of chemical additives used to add flavour, colour or increase their shelf life. This would trigger behavioral problems such as hyperactivity and poor concentration. A child psychologist, Mary Caputo in The Food Show (2005) said that research had revealed that reducing unhealthy foods in children’s diet can improve their behaviour. Jack Green also added that teachers have noticed a clear improvement in student’s behaviour, they are relatively calmer after recess (the Food Show 2005).

Apart from that, the food packaging from junk food has caused some serious litter problems in schools. The pre-packaged meals, crisp packets, cartons, takeaway foods and canned drinks are the major contributor of litter problem as students unethically leave all the rubbishes behind after eating it (The Food Show 2005). School canteens that have already banned the sale of junk food have also reduced their litter problem and consequently reducing the school cleaning cost. Thus, school groundsman can now focus more maintenance for school benefits and image (The Food Show 2005).

In conclusion, I strongly believe that the sale of junk food should be banned in school canteens for the benefit of our younger generation. We should put off their mind from thinking that they can eat junk food whenever they like without any consequences (Tran 2005). If no action to be taken swiftly, one day we might have to pay the piper.

Monday, May 10, 2010

Argumentative essay (JUNK FOOD) draft 2

Obesity among our children has seen an epidemic rise for the past few years and the fingers are all pointing at the voracious consumption of junk food, which are foods that are believed to be unhealthy and lack in nutrients (Smith 2005). The accusation has some relevance to it as statistic showed that in year 2003, relatively 50 % of children have consume sugar and fat more than recommended, the large source of this came from eating junk foods like fast foods and soda drinks (Australian Nutrition Journal 2004). There is a large debate on should the junk food to be ban from selling in the school canteen or not. From my respective view, it is indeed wise solution to ban the sale of junk food in school canteen as it brings a lot of consequences.

Including obesity problems, junk food is considered the main culprit of many health problems. Smith (2005) agrees that eating junk food is a part of healthy diet if taken in moderation. But, the problem is these junk foods are over-consumed by the youngsters (The Food Show 2005). This is backed with the fact that for the past 30 years, the nutritional value of food eaten by Australian children has been falling gradually due to availability of junk foods in school canteens in which more than 50% of schoolchildren buy all their lunches consist of junk foods. This is contributing to weight gain because junk foods raise kilojoule intake and lack physical activity to burn the calories (Tran 2005). Besides that, Dental Association also lauds for banning of soft drinks sale in schools because there is declining trend of dental health in primary-school children (Tran 2005).

Secondly, the chemical additives contained in junk foods are causing behavioural problems in children. Snack foods have a craze towards younger generation. Out of thirteen most popular snack foods, only four of it has high nutritional value (Health Foundation 2005), which means he others have loads of chemical additives used to add flavour, colour or increase their shelf life. This would trigger behavioral problems such as hyperactivity and poor concentration. A child psychologist, Mary Caputo in The Food Show (2005) said that research had revealed that reducing unhealthy foods in children’s diet can improve their behaviour. Jack Green also added that teachers have noticed a clear improvement in student’s behaviour, they are relatively calmer after recess (the Food Show 2005).

Apart from that, the food packaging from junk food has caused some serious litter problem in schools. The pre-packaged meals, crisp packets, cartons, takeaway foods and canned drinks are the major contributor of litter problem as students unethically leave all the rubbishes behind after eating it (The Food Show 2005). School canteens that have already banned the sale of junk food have also reduced their litter problem and consequently reducing the school cleaning cost. Thus, school groundsman can now focus more maintenance for school benefits and image (The Food Show 2005).

In conclusion, I strongly believe that the sale of junk food should be ban in school canteens for the benefit of our younger generation. We should put off their mind from thinking that they can eat junk food whenever they like without any consequences (Tran 2005). If no action to be taken swiftly, one day might have to pay the piper.

Bali Nine's Scott Rush circumcised in jail 'for Islam'

  • Rush undergoes secretive circumcision
  • Rush at Christian services a week ago
  • Authorities question his motives

BALI Nine death row prisoner Scott Rush has been circumcised in a secret jail ceremony in Bali and has told authorities he is learning about Islam.

Authorities at Kerobokan Jail confirmed that Rush had undergone a circumcision on Friday in the jail's Muslim prayer area.

The jail's doctor and other officials were not even aware the circumcision had taken place until the weekend and were angered that such a procedure had been conducted by someone who was not authorised by the jail.

They have since questioned Rush's motives and whether he had really converted to Islam. Rush is a Catholic and his parents are staunchly religious.

As recently as a week ago Rush attending Christian church services at the jail.

The jail's head of education and rehabilitation, Anang, said that Rush had told him he was still learning about Islam.

His answers were complicated,'' Anang said about his discussion with Rush, whom he has told to provide him with more answers today.

And the jail's doctor, Agung Hartawan, who was only aware of the circumcision on the weekend said luckily it was a good job and not bleeding too much.

Dr Hartawan said he had asked Rush if he converted to Islam and that he said: "I want to learn Islam."

And he said when he further questioned Rush about the secretive procedure and whether his parents were even aware of it, that Rush had told him: "This is my right and I just want to know about Islam, I want to learn about Islam.''

Rush is one of three members of the Bali Nine on death row for their role in the heroin trafficking gang. He is due to lodge his final appeal very soon.-Herald Sun

Critique:

The news is about Scott Rush, an Australian who is on trial in Indonesia for drug trafficking has told the court that he had secretly circumcised ( cutting a piece of skin on his private part) on the jail's mosque and learning about islam. However, he did not commit that he has changed religion when asked and the authorities seems suspicious of his intention. If he is proven guilty for drug trafficking, he may faces death sentence there. What disappoints me a comment gave by Peter.T of his ignorance about the muslims and their feqah. One should accept and understand other people's religion and not label them with insulting words. To read the comment made by him, the news can be viewed at http://www.news.com.au/national/bali-nines-scott-rush-circumcised-in-jail-for-islam/story-e6frfkvr-1225864792025

Monday, April 19, 2010

Argumentative essay (JUNK FOOD) draft 1

Obesity among our children has seen an epidemic rise for the past few years and the fingers are all pointing at the voracious consumption of junk food, which are foods that are believed to be unhealthy and lack in nutrients (Smith 2005). The accusation has some relevance to it as statistic showed that in year 2003, relatively 50 % of children have consume sugar and fat more than recommended, the large source of this came from eating junk foods like fast foods and soda drinks (Australian Nutrition Journal 2004). There is a large debate on should the junk food to be ban from selling in the school canteen or not. From my respective view, it is indeed wise solution to ban the sale of junk food in school canteen as it brings a lot of consequences.

Including obesity problems, junk food is considered the main culprit of many health problems. Jemma Smith (2005) agrees that eating junk food is a part of healthy diet if taken in moderation. But, the problem is these junk foods are over-consumed by the youngsters (The Food Show 2005). This is backed with the fact that for the past 30 years, the nutritional value of food eaten by Australian children has been falling gradually due to availability of junk foods in school canteens in which more than 50% of schoolchildren buy all their lunches consist of junk foods. This is contributing to weight gain because junk foods raise kilojoule intake and lack physical activity to burn the calories (Tran 2005). Besides that, Dental Association also lauds for banning of soft drinks sale in schools because there is declining trend of dental health in primary-school children (Tran 2005).

Secondly, the chemical additives contained in junk foods are causing behavioural problems in children. Snack foods have a craze towards younger generation. Out of thirteen most popular snack foods, only four of it has high nutritional value (Health Foundation 2005), which means he others have loads of chemical additives used to add flavour, colour or increase their shelf life. This would trigger behavioral problems such as hyperactivity and poor concentration. A child psychologist, Mary Caputo in The Food Show (2005) said that research had revealed that reducing unhealthy foods in children’s diet can improve their behaviour. Jack Green also added that teachers have noticed a clear improvement in student’s behaviour, they are relatively calmer after recess (the Food Show 2005).

Apart from that, the food packaging from junk food has caused some serious litter problem in schools. The pre-packaged meals, crisp packets, cartons, takeaway foods and canned drinks are the major contributor of litter problem as students unethically leave all the rubbishes behind after eating it (The Food Show 2005). School canteens that have already banned the sale of junk food have also reduced their litter problem and consequently reducing the school cleaning cost. Thus, school groundsman can now focus more maintenance for school benefits and image (The Food Show 2005).

In conclusion, I strongly believe that the sale of junk food should be ban in school canteens for the benefit of our younger generation. We should put off their mind from thinking that they can eat junk food whenever they like without any consequences (Tran 2005). If no action to be taken swiftly, one day might have to pay the piper.

Friday, April 9, 2010

Text Production Draft 2#

The relationship between voracious modernization and global warming has been open to much interpretation and acrimonious debate. Misassumption by individuals about global warming had made them to become ignorant on the issue that is affecting our mother nature. The atmosphere, the most vulnerable place in the earth’s ecological system has been thickened by global warming pollution primarily carbon dioxide had resulted to more heat trapped in the atmosphere. In the documentary ‘An Inconvenient Truth’ (2007, DVD, Paramount Pictures), Albert Gore former US Senator explained two ‘canaries in the coal mine’ as the alarm bell of the signings of global warming. Global warming had triggered severe climate changes and a quick solution should be taken in place to seize the issue.

Statistic shows that the ten hottest years ever measured all had occurred for the last fourteen years (An inconvenient truth, 2007). Temperature increase is taken place all over the world in which leads to overwhelming effects such as the massive heat wave which killed thirty-five thousands of people in Europe. The ocean is not escaped from the increase in temperature as well; consequentially produces stronger storms as can be seen in the last couple of years like the Ivan, Jeannie, Frances and most devastating, the Katrina. Before the Katrina hits New Orleans, it ‘went over warmer waters’ which built up its ‘wind velocity’ and ’moisture content’. The effect was horrendous and indescribable (An inconvenient truth, 2007).

Other than that, severe floods are also occurring due to the precipitation at one time that causes heavy downpour (An inconvenient truth, 2007). Paradoxically, the vigorous precipitation may also bring to more severe and longer draughts in some other places (Chris, 2006), such events that that can be seen in Darfur and Niger. Melting of permafrost had damaged the structure that was built and plants lived on top of it. Global warming also may leads to melting of ice shelves that could halted the ‘ocean conveyer’, which in turn causes sudden jump to the European climate. The melting of land-based ice in the West Antarctica and Greenland would rise up the sea level up to 20 feet which means most of populated city situated at the ocean bay will possibly underwater when the ice melts (An inconvenient truth, 2007).

The ecological system has taken its toll from the changes in the season. The ‘ecological midgets’ are also taken in place, for example the pine beetle problem in the United States and rushing in of exotic species to the new ecology. Species are also facing extinction and coral reefs are bleaching in which global warming has some contribute to it. The increase in more and more troublesome infectious diseases as result of with global warming, vectors reaching to higher altitudes (An inconvenient truth, 2007).

Sir Winston Churchill once said “The era of procrastination, of half-measures, of soothing and baffling expedience, of delays, is coming to its close. In its place we are entering a period of consequences.” (1936). We as the people of this world has seen the alarming signs of global warming and with scientifically proven should find a way so that the warning are ‘heard’ and ‘responded to’ (An inconvenient truth, 2007). Without further delay, we should start by emitting lower carbon dioxide emissions and use less energy or using it more efficiently (Woodford, 2006). Energy efficiency can be improved at home by using electric and electronic appliances that uses efficient energy. Instead of driving a car, try to walk or ride a bicycle if we can, use the public transportation or else, buy a hybrid car if possible. Mother Nature needs your help to speak up for her, use the knowledge that you have to raise the community awareness on this sickening moral issue.

In conclusion, global warming has seriously given a tremendous and adverse effect on our mother earth as mentioned above. Living things are in jeopardy of these catastrophes including human beings that are single-handedly causing the issue in the first place. Each individuals have their say not to global warming, say no more to technology that are not environmental-friendly. Taking the words in a part of the movie “the solutions are in our hands, we just have to have the determination to make it happen” (An inconvenient truth, 2007).

Text Production Draft 1#

The relationship between voracious modernization and global warming has been open to much interpretation and acrimonious debate. Misassumption by individuals about global warming had made them to become ignorant on the issue that is affecting our mother nature. The atmosphere, considerably regarded as the most vulnerable place in the earth’s ecological system as the composition of it can be changed, the thin layer of atmosphere has been thicken by global warming pollution, mainly from the effects of modernization had resulted more heat trapped in the atmosphere. Albert Gore, former US senator explained the effects of global warming in terms of climate change in the documentary ‘An Inconvenient Truth’ (2007, DVD, Paramount Pictures). He explained two ‘canaries in the coal mine’ as the alarm bell of the signings of global warming.

Statistics showed that the ten hottest years ever measured, all had occurred for the last fourteen years (Gore, 2007). Temperature increase is taken place all over the world in which leads to overwhelming effects such as the massive heat wave which killed thirty-five thousands of people in Europe. The ocean is not escaped from the increase in temperature as well; consequentially produces stronger storms as can be seen in the last couple of years like the Ivan, Jeannie, Frances and most devastating, the Katrina. According to Al Gore (2007), before the Katrina hits New Orleans, it ‘went over warmer waters’ and builds up the ‘wind velocity’ as well as the ’moisture content’. He added, the effect is ‘horrendous’ and indescribable.

Other than that, severe floods are also occurring due to the precipitation at one time that causes heavy downpour (Gore, 2007). Paradoxically, the vigorous precipitation may also bring to more, severe and longer draughts, such events that that can be seen in Darfur and Niger. Melting of permafrost had damaged the structure that was built and plants lived on top of it. Global warming also may leads to melting of ice shelves that could halted the ‘ocean conveyer’, which in turn causes sudden jump to the European climate. The ecological system has taken its toll from the changes in the season as the cause of global warming. The ‘ecological midgets’ are also taken in place, for example the pine beetle problem in the United States and rushing in of exotic species to the new ecology. Species are also facing extinction. The increase in more and more troublesome infectious diseases as result of with global warming, vectors reaching to higher altitudes (Gore, 2007).

The melting of land base ice in the Antarctica, particularly the West Antarctica and Greenland would raise up the sea level up to 20 feet. This means most of populated city situated at the bay of the ocean will possibly underwater (Gore, 2007). Sir Winston Churchill once said “The era of procrastination, of half-measures, of soothing and baffling expedience, of delays, is coming to its close. In its place we are entering a period of consequences.” (1936)

We as the people of this world has seen the signings and with scientifically proven should find a way so that the warning are ‘heard’ and ‘responded to’ (Gore, 2007). Thus, we should start by emitting lower carbon dioxide emissions and use less energy or using it more efficiently. (Chris Woodford, 2006). Energy efficiency can be improved at home by using electric and electronic appliances that uses efficient energy. Instead of driving a car, try to walk or ride a bicycle if we can, use the public transportation or else, buy a hybrid car if possible. Mother Nature needs your help to speak up for them, use the knowledge that you have to raise the community awareness on this sickening moral issue.

In conclusion, global issues must be tackled with the united stand by all the people in the world to make it happen. It takes time for issues like this to be solved, so we should be wise enough to spend the precious time we have before it is too late.

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